supplierchannel求英语大神帮我看一下下面这段话!如果有语法错误或者不符合表达规范的请指出谢谢!能再帮忙润色一下的更好,【I have been envisioning the scene over and over again that I stand in the seremony hall,pledging that I am going to undertake the responsibilities to my family and my country.However,when i am actually standing here,words fail me.】
I have been envisioning the scene over and over again,of which i stood in the ceremony hall and pledging that i would undertake the responsibilities for my family and my homeland.Howeven,words fail me...
感觉通顺好多！！多谢大神^W^
不客气，才发现however打错了，不好意思
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over and over again 后面的动词都改为过去式，因为你语境是表达一种虚拟的，非现实的。stand - stoodi am going - i was goingto - ofmy country - 可以省略word fail me 是要表达什么意思？words fail me是心情无法用语言表达的意思，错了吗？my country...
my country - 可以省略 （这个是my可以省略）噢 这样的话 可以考虑用这个短语 in vain 表示徒劳的，无效。word comes in vain.
again that 改为again, which 。最后一句不是太明白
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