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麻烦各位英语高手帮我看看这篇文章有什么语法等方面的问题,顺便告诉我该如何修改,My vacationI had a scary but interesting summer vacation.My parents and I went to Hainan by plane.It was very fast.After getting there,the weather is hot,and a number of people were wore shoes and T-shirt.The first day,we went to a restaurant and ate some seafood like fish,octopus.They were delicious.On the second day,the weather still hot.We went to the sea.My parents went swimming .But I went diving in the sea and played the beach volleyball.We were tired but happy.Then we went to the hotel.We played gobang and relaxing there for two hours.After that,we take a ship on the sea,when I looked out of a really shark.I were so scaried that I couldn't move.Luckily,the shark was quickly left.The third day,my parents and I visited friends.They were very friendly.And they with we went to visited a museum.It was very big.And I saw some kinds of butterflies.They were very beautiful.And I learned a lot of their living habits.We were surprise.When we there ,time goes quickly.It is time for leaving there.And I think Hainan was a good place to have fun.I hope to go Hainan again.
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&坐飞机&,一般不用by plane这种说法,这是明显的中国式英语.老外一般用by air.即我和爸妈坐飞机去海南这句改为：my parents and I went to Hainan by air.fast&不用来形容旅途的快捷,又是中国式英语.你想表达的是坐飞机很快,用it was very quick比较好.因为天气热这句话,你不能直接放在里面,因为是单独的句子了,你必须加连接词.改为：After getting there,because of the hot weather,a number of .(去掉and）.第一天,应该是On the first day,你少了一个on.fish和octopus之间最好加个and.即：ate&some seafood like fishs and octopus.&第二天,天气依旧很热.你少了be动词.On the second day ,the weather WAS still hot.play volleyball,不需要the.paly&soccer ,play&tennis.球类运动都不要加定冠词.We played gobang and relaxing there for two hours这句应该改为We played gobang and relaxed there for two hours.After that,we take a ship on the sea,when I looked out of a really shark这句应该改为we&took a ship at sea ,and I founded out a real shark.错误太多,首先take应该是过去式,然后,发现一条鲨鱼用的短语应该是found&out ,而不是look&out.look&out&是小心的意思.最后,真的鲨鱼是real&shark,不是really&shark ,really不做形容词.And they with we went to visited a museum.这句改为And&they&visited a museum with me.去参观博物馆直接用visit就行了,干嘛要用go to visit ,老外不会这么说英语.with me 不能放在they的后面.And I learned a lot of their living habits应该是learn&a&lot&about&their&living&habits.这里用learn&about&更好.We were surprise这里你想表达我们都震惊了,应该用surprised.不是surprise,这是动词不是形容词.差不多就这些,简单给你改改,基本每句话都有错,你的英语还需要努力学习.& &全手打,
能不能具体改改，我期末考要用。还有“the weather is hot,and a number of people were wore shoes and T-shirt.”是不是要改成“
because of the hot weather，a number of people were wore shoes and T-shirt.”？
这还不具体啊，我每句话都帮你改了哇，你是要我帮你全文改好放进来？你先采纳我的回答吧，我帮你改就是了，两分钟的事儿。
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