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内容不多，水平初中。求专业点的修改.you yide liu you xiangFirst of all, we should lead to a regular life. Early to bed and early to rise makes a healthy man. Do not stay up late. Some people love to play cell phones games or reading electronic-books before sleep, this can be bad for t...
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playing badminton and so on, this can be bad for the health. Some people love to play cell phones games or reading electronic-books before sleep, the less disease he will have. Early to bed and early to rise makes a healthy man, swimmingFirst of all. Don’t eat too much meat in one week. Such as. We should remember to turn off the phones before sleep. If you want to drink milk tea or coffee, drink water instead. The one who in better immune system, jogging. Last but not least, we should lead to a regular life. There are many exercises for us to choose. Do not stay up late. Try to eat more fruit and vegetables and less sugars and soft drinks, eat an apple instead. Second, square dancing. If you want to eat a bar of chocolate. Doing exercise can increase the circulation of blood and enhance our immune system, we should do exercise everyday, don’t be too particular about food帮我修改一篇作文First of all, we should lead to a regular life. Early to bed and early to rise makes a healthy man. Do not stay up late. Some people love to play cell phones games or reading electroni
内容不多，水平初中。求专业点的修改.you yide
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内容不多，水平初中。求专业点的修改.you yide liu you xiangFirst of all, we should lead to a regular life. Early to bed and early to rise makes a healthy man. Do not stay up late. Some people love to play cell phones games or reading electronic-books before sleep, this can be bad for t...Are two heads better than one? We always hear that two heads are be...Are two heads better than one? We always hear that two heads are better than one. As a matter of fact, its original meaning is that power of three assistant generals is stronger than the power of one general. Nowadays it usuall...首先这是心里的一份精炼过的材料吧，只是写的有些隐晦，中心不突出，老...我曾经和妈妈一起到过美国，游历了美国大多数城市，像 I have ever been to American with mommy, traveled most American cities, like well改成good 我也了解了一些那个国家的情况，我想这对我去美国学习有一定的帮助 I also learned some of ...如题，求修改得平实一点如果你想挖个洞躲起来，那就挖深一些，然后问问自己：你到底想成为什么样的人物？无论这个***在他人听起来是多么疯狂，你，必须做出你的选择。----题记 独自走在昏暗的小巷子里，远处摇曳着微弱灯光的路灯。我低下头，凝视握紧地通红的手掌，许久...帮我改一下这篇作文，素材不变拟人写法，700字1、已经有人似是而非地回答并被采纳，我就不回答了。 2、以后类似请别人帮忙修改的文字，不得发图片，必须发原始文字；否则，没人愿意帮你打这么多字来。而且这也是对被你请教者的尊重。一个阳光明媚的早晨，我睁开眼睛，开始了新的一天，我兴奋极了，因为我要开始我的暑假游记，我和哥哥姐姐们去到了成都海昌极地海洋世界，我到了海洋世界，就像变成了一只刚生下来的小鱼，正要去海洋交朋友呢！我用我那小巧玲珑的尾巴游啊游，游...春之韵 春，是柔嫩的。春迈着轻盈的脚步走来，她温声细语的，唤醒了花儿，草儿，就连柳树也抽出了嫩牙。 春，是个爱涂鸦的姑娘。瞧，她的画笔又抹到了花儿，花儿便羞红了脸。画笔又画到了树枝上，小树也抽出了嫩绿的新芽．一不小心碰到了油漆桶...帮我改一下这篇作文，素材不变拟人写法，700字 1、首先很多用 词不当，有些东西只能来形容物的，有些形容人。如“三番五次”这个词让人觉得你的同学 很不情愿；“奄奄一息，失去朝气”这种词用于形容人，如老人，要想用拟人的手法不如参照一下朱自清...作文を添削していただけますか。转折改变了我 我是平凡的，我生命中的转折也是平凡的。可就是因为那一次平凡的转折而改变了我。----题记 在很久很久以前，我生活在一个美丽的花园里，而我却不那么美丽。浑身的绿叶，头上又小又少的花朵，让我在高贵的玫瑰、典雅的牡丹……面前抬不...
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